A GUN IN CARMEL: THIRSTER

 

notes:

A GUN IN CARMEL: YOU GOTTA DO PICKLEBALL NOW

 

"how are you?" i hear from Liza while in line at Safeway.

me: i swallow my mustache every time i eat but other than that i'm okay. can you kiss me?

Liza: rather unusual for a checker to kiss a customer out of the blue but i'll do it not because it's your birthday but because i want to see how hairy your mouth is.

me: how do i subtly ask if you're single?

Liza: brushing up on wikiHow now? well you don't see a ring on my finger but that doesn't mean anything. you know i never catch the action around here, yesterday on my day off an old man died under the produce mister. 

me: what's on sale this morning?

Liza: you know you really should join me for pickleball.

me: but i hate pickleball.........until recently.

Liza: it's crazy, Clint Eastwood comes out wagging his gun at our girl group threatening to shoot us if we don't simmer down!!!

me: elaborate, my life is never this exciting.

Liza pokes me in the small of my back with her gunfinger.

Liza: see? i like you, kid, you can take a hit. we broke the touch barrier just then. i could go for you. you're young enough to be my son but you'd like that. you like mommies, right?

me: you're going too fast for me, i must be an old man now.

Liza: you should see me in my silver wetsuit on that pickleball court, i look CUTE.

me: i imagined that and my brain locked.

Liza: Clint gets ornery at us gal pals having a good time, he said we're too LOUD in our hollering celebrations. old man forgot to have fun in his life and now is jealous he can't get us anymore.

me: hoot more i say, Clint's time is over.  

at the next session at the local Carmel chapter of pickleball.

Clint Eastwood: *grizzly* pipe down or i'll shoot!!!

Liza: do you see a lawn here? the green is the court. i'd say check your eyes, old man, but you have no eyes. your eyes are dust!!! that was your secret, that's how you made your famous Clint Eastwood severe-eyes look. 

Clint: have you no respect for others?

Liza: pickleball players have a code: there's no respect, we're all trying to win!!!

Oahu: it's Hawaii, there's ALWAYS a flash-flood emergency...

dry dining: eating at a restaurant without ordering cocktails.

Leslie Sbrocco: eating a dry tasteless meal at a restaurant...

Chuck Norris: i'm in a dragon rotunda with Bruce Lee and Death ready to throw down. what? i gotta make it to 100, right?...

Jesse Palmer: it's better that The Bachelorette was canceled. now people will have time to listen to Bjork. Bjork's Mormon, right? and i can get back to doing.........what is it i do again? play football? was i in Kids in the Hall?

nerd asking out a cheerleader: you can't go out with me because your mother says you're too young to date? THAT's the reason?...

Neil Hope: i would have rather played Claude and lived in real life than played Wheels the cool guy with a crappy real life...

i've taken to my bed: not for sex, i have dysentery.

at mall karate the next sunrise, sensei Mordecai is leading his dojo in tribute. 

Mordecai: moment of silence for Chuck. Chuck Norris would always tell me he was the American Bruce Lee.

Bruce Lee: but i was more American than Chuck Norris...

the karate kids do a HI-YAH!!! and break three boards with their chop-hand. 

then Chuck Norris comes out and wrestles a bear.

Lani O'Grady: i played Brett Somers in the Lifetime movie...

at the JD Vance rally: no they're saying you need to use Pepsodent...

Debralee Scott: why are we inside the ballroom photograph in The Shining?

Jonathan Frakes: beam me up, Scott.

Chuck Norris: is this the audition to become a Klingon?

Godspell: now the world don't move to the beat of just one drum...

college: remember, it's a "college career."

Chuck Norris: i punched a cloud in frustration over being dead and all the water came out, sorry, Hawaii.

Go Ask Alice: it was still the '70s, still wholesome, so FINK was in black graffiti on the locker, not FUCK. the '70s, the last time there was a rap session under elm trees at a muni park on a Saturday morning with teens wearing blue and beige coats...

Brighton & Albion: we haven't been the same since Jonathan Livingston Seagull died...

Banksy: you can't put a price on art...

Basquiat: you were my audience that wasn't born yet, Banksy!!!

Chuck Norris: Chuck Norris painted Death, Death died.

Trent Reznor: the end of "Ringfinger" is a fly buzzing...

Dash: really only goes on salmon...

a bank in the 1930s: for some reason we needed our own building of 100 floors. we were like a Macy's but not fun. 

King Kong: the most famous Pre-Code movie of all time...

Bad Bunny: at least i got rid of that annoying reggaeton. you're welcome, world.

me: maniac.

Liza: Clint can't stomach little spunky women like me.

Mary Ann: short is cute if you have a mane of lioness hair.

me: i hear a delivery truck. peculiar, DoorDash dropping off food at a Safeway?

Liza: yeah that brown bag is my Burger King.

me: i see, you roped me into our first-date food.

Jen R: i found the new Whopper milder, less mealy. less disgusting than before.

Liza: this new Whopper tastes like In N Out Burger, that's the sign i was waiting for, it means we should be together. 

SEATTLE'S BEST: COLOROUS

 

Jackie: you're fucking my daughter, too?!!!

Walker hands up: it's not what you think, i love you both!!!

Jackie: *HEAVY SIGH* i suppose that's one way to be a mentor. but you really gotta help her along her lifepath, you know? aid her in her career.

Walker: i am but she's smarter than me.

Jackie: along with me, please?

Walker: i'm sorry, i know, this is really bad stepdad porn.

Jackie: my tongue is the ping-pong paddle and your balls are two ping-pong balls.

Kourtney: MOM!!! you're embarrassing me!!!

Jackie: oh sorry. firstly i didn't know you were in the room.

Kourtney: it's a small dressing room.

Jackie: and second i didn't know i wasn't a sexy woman anymore.

Walker: you're a mom. i fell in love with the mom in you.

Kourtney and Jackie hug and high-five.

Kourtney: i'm sorry too, mom.

Jackie: i get it, daughter. he has that helpless pet-lizard look to his eyes.

improv: the Rotoscope of writing.

Rachel Reid: hockey romance wasn't a thing...

Mothra: she didn't live long enough to prove she was a good mother...

Seiya: i'm a pitcher who comes in in minor relief for the Chicago Cubs. my arm surgery was minor...

conceit: not a concept, a conceit.

Will Shakespeare: ...

Will Shakespeare: no i will not. i shall :)

LUSH: our bath bombs are now Quidditch snitches...

Go Ask Alice: what happened to the music?.........i mean that in a general sense. what happened to society in the '70s? what happened to the Hippie Movement? all we kept were the bellbottoms...

Nirvanna the Band - the Show - the Movie: Nirvana in New York? Nirvana on Broadway?.........oh...

collapsed lung: doctors are operating under the assumption that it's mild and won't require an operation...

me: can i tell you my shuffleboard monologue now?

Jen R: *looks around* i'm the only one here, Dr. Robbins took an early lunch and left for the weekend.

me: so i was OBSESSED with shuffleboard, for one week. we went on a Disneyland Cruise when i was 8. it was shuffleboard for breakfast, lunch, and dinner in those days. those discs, those brooms!!! yeah. i hung out of the side of that deck all week. then the cruise ended and so did the sport of shuffleboard.

Jen: speaking of, what should you give up for Lent? i'm giving up anchovies on my pizza...

Patrick Lavender: which reminds me, when that cute pizza boy came around yesterafternoon, i tipped him with a $2 bill with Trump's face on it.

pizza boy: yeah that wasn't funny, i don't actually do porn, pizza is my pay. was that a gag gift or was that real money?

Trump: you really don't want me telling you what i know about how money gets made...

Sphinx the cat: lower the drape, man, just because i'm from Egypt doesn't mean i appreciate 100-degree weather!!!

Kurt Cobain: Nirvana was The Beatles as sung by The Chipmunks.

Billy Corgan: did you used to say "corn on the cop" as a paranoid kid? you thought the police were chasing you under your bed, after you all the time, out to get you at school. that's weird.

Kurt: Billy, you're the whitest guy i know.

dating profile: everyone enjoys mountain biking at sunset...

Jun Yoruname: Jun Yourname. flooshed means when you don't flush the toilet after pooing, you dance instead.

Aaron Judge: i need a good zhuzh, if i'm gonna be Derek Jeter now, i need to get more handsome...

Basquiat (1996): why didn't Courtney Love play Madonna?...

Amy Sherald: i'm a shero.

Bill Clinton, weak now with age, shakily holds a pen as he reaches for the paper.

Bill Clinton: what do i have to sign? i'm still President.

Hillary Clinton: I'M President, Bill!!! the county was saved because of me. 

Bill: there's no ink in the pen...

Bill: is Lacey Chabert really giving up Hallmark movies?

Lacey Chabert: i shoulda been in Call the Midwife...

iRestore: it won't grow hair but you'll look cool like you're in TRON.

Kourtney: okay it's time for me to get my act off the ground.

Jackie: and together.

Kourtney: i'm like done with the forest college i went to, right? all actresses work at the mall. i'm gonna work at Hot Dog on a Stick, i'd look so CUTE in that uniform!!! white, red, and blue, get it? and mustard yellow, huh huh?

Walker: okay but be careful, i heard Roger Federer was a real grouch when he worked there.

at Sherman Oaks Galleria.

Kourtney: you still work here?

Roger Federer in a Hot Dog on a Stick tall hat: tell Carly Severn there was a hair in every lemonade cup she made!!! you don't wanna be working here, toots. you have the perfect colors for work somewhere else i know well.

the next day Kourtney is working as a Swiss Guard for the Pope.

Roger: see? you already were in the colors!!!

Kourtney: is the Pope nice?

Roger: i know him well, don't worry, he's a cool boss, oh yes he's a pussycat. he tried to touch my racquet rod one time when i was giving him a private lesson at the Vatican but that was a misunderstanding.

Palpatine: wait there was a tennis court in the Vatican the whole time i was there?

Rafa Nadal: the Vatican court is clay!!!

Djokovic in Swiss Guard garb: ready for the Tournament of Friendship?

Roger: The Pope watches you as you sleep but that's only because he's bored. 

SEATTLE'S BEST: NINE DAY WONDER

 

Jackie makes a surprise visit to Seattle.........to see Walker.

Walker just makes it to a random motel in time to greet her.

Walker, huffing and puffing: so you're not visiting your daughter while you're here?

Jackie: i don't want her to know i'm here. i don't want to be a helicopter parent, i'm sure she's the next Diane Keaton by now. but YOU, man, i can see needs help. is that cum in your ear?

Walker: you're the second woman to ask me that today.

Jackie: let's hop in the shower so i can wash off that stage makeup. the right way.

in the motel shower.

Jackie: see i like this because motel showers are notoriously tiny. not meant for two people, wink wink. 

Walker: help me.

Jackie: i know you're up here in the Pacific Northwest to give my Kourtney moral support in her crazy career. see these SLENDER bottles of stuff i brought from back home?

Walker: oh thanks!!! genuine shampoo and conditioner from a ritzy Pebble Beach hotel!!! i feel fancy already. those rich idiots never considered me one of their own, what with me being a shaggy-haired guy who looks like a surfer but doesn't surf, just stays at the beach.

Jackie: don't listen to those legacy snobs, you're my man. after my husband died. 

Jackie shakes the bottles.

Walker: owh that's COLD!!! cold driplets of water there on my blond chest.

Jackie: yeah they haven't been used in a while.

Patrick Lavender in a scuba snorkel: if i had just married a nice girl from the city named Eucalyptus, i wouldn't have gone down that dark path to Trump.

Australian women: we're the presidents of all world art and sport institutions.

me: i'm visiting my psychiatrist's couch today.

Jen R: how come?

me: Sunday, March 15, 2026 had WAY TOO MANY events happening for one Sunday, too many things in ONE day, it was thing overload, no human could keep up: WBC U.S. vs. the D.R./ the Players golf thing/ the Oscars/ Selection Sunday/ SNL with Harry Styles double-dutying/ Family Guy/ Indian Wells tournament...

Jen: and Rooster Fighter. you gotta take things more zen, instead of worrying who the schedulers are remember how you felt as you were watching the Oscars.

me: i forgot everything and just zoned out for 5 hours...

Jen: exactly.

Dr. Robbins: are you wearing something green for St. Patrick's Day? oh yeah your Grinch socks. is that an orange tie?...

Dr. Robbins: how do you look after you shower?

me: my hair is like Shemp from The Three Stooges with an Orthodox-Jew bushy beard.

Dr. Robbins: checks out.

me: can i perform my shuffleboard monologue for you now?

Dr. Robbins: i don't want to hear that again.

Jenny Jones: you look GREAT!!! what's your secret?

Ricki Lake: Fatty.

Jenny: i never called you that on my show.

Ricki: no, Fatty pills.

aspiring actress: i would have been an inspiring actress if i had been an actress...

4th Grade milk monitor: i'm gonna punch all my classmates' milk cards at recess. i'm not a violent boy, i got a holepunch.

Michael B. Jordan: it's about time i play Basquiat...

Charles Martinet: i am the same as that cartoon Batman guy.

Kevin Conroy: do tell.

Charles: we both played lawyers i think? we were both plucked out of obscurity from an '80s courtroom drama? do you wear the cowl when you copulate?

Kevin: yes i'm Melissa Maker's voice daddy. do you...?

Charles: no i don't play the games, i have no hand/eye coordination whatsoever. 

Kevin: then how do you drive? do you self-drive? self-drive your cart?

Charles: i have Jessica Tandy drive me everywhere.

Hugh Grant: can you show me the under-the-leg shot? it's the only way i can beat Emma Thompson in pickleball.

Timothee Chalamet: tell Emma to stay in the kitchen...

Hugh: that's how i got in trouble with her in the first place.

 

Batman: i come from a planet with magma oceans that smells like a rotten egg...

Saturday Night Live UK: the host of the British show will host the American show later that same Saturday...

Tina Fey wearing a monocle: not cool, Lorne!!!

Cascade: you're not fully clean unless you clean your filter.

Zest: unless your dishwasher is Zestfully clean!!! which requires you to use Zest soap in your dishwasher. soap is soap. a shower is a shower.

Chibiusa: i know everybody thought i was annoying, but i had to be on the show!!! i was Sailor Moon's daughter!!! you know?

medical scribe: i wanted to be a monk but my mother's happy...

woman of the house on the toilet: i'm gonna be here awhile. i took in with me a steamy novel for the eventual steamy poo i'll make.

Jackie: what makes our lovemaking unique?

Walker and Jackie in unison: the peanut butter.

the two of them give each other a ping-pong high-five.

Jackie: i tip your nipples with peanut butter.

Walker: and peanut butter in your butt.

Dr. Robbins: it's a unique technique.

Jackie: do you like it when i go cross-eyed deepthroating your cock? when my face turns red and i make that duck sound with my mouth?

Walker: um, yes. do you like it when i say you have nice eyes?

Jackie: you can't tell Kourtney about us.

Walker: i thought she knew.

Jackie: a mother's gotta have ONE secret from her daughter!!! 

Walker: so you know all that peanut-butter stuff? i do that with Kourtney, too.

Jackie: ...