Wednesday, October 16, 2013

SSS: CUT


*CLICKY CLICKY*

click above to begin the topography map, 2 of 4



time to get serious now
time to reflect
back to a time when art replaced religion
and food

guitar licks were heavy
they cut to the bone
they prevented you from cutting
because they were sounding out your pain

or you'd be cut down

the closest you've ever been to going to church
a modern church of muddy lyrics and fury
lyrics which appropriated the staid sermon
and transformed it into '90s cool

the succession of the music line
and the success, though unwanted,
guaranteed a clean jump from the Beatles to then
the present was secure

it was all cut down

our future is not

secure


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3 comments:

Cheeky Minx said...

Your words are the straight razor, slicing through to the core, to the ache buried deep in my flesh.

You cut so good, babe...

the late phoenix said...

the first cut is the deepest...

Juliette said...

When it comes to being lucky, she's cursed.

The future is not secure.