Wednesday, September 4, 2013

SSS: FAMILIA


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mother's failing health

for granted catches up

in the city noise

escape

in the city soundscapes

no attention

in the silence

bright sorrow

soon is here

unplanned

certain

fate takes hold

birthright

WHISPERED, CLICK HERE, RIGHT HERE AT THIS LINK at birth

pointed toward death

happy the prize

famous the dream

success the icing

sex the sauce

love the goal

alone the real

sun the enemy

night my space

book my face

for the part

of the fool

cat sleeps

all my care

goes unnoticed

soon

gone

family

gone

too

soon

always

known

threads

snap

into

action

frenzied

knowledge

will you be my family?




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8 comments:

Kazi G said...

Your verse is very catching at a time when I am pondering heavy thoughts as well. Siblings in angst?

:*

~Kazi xxx

Cheeky Minx said...

Forever and always, babe.

The poetry of your soul is breathtaking... x

the late phoenix said...

kazi: i am the picture in the dictionary definition of "angst", there's a pic of a phoenix to the right of the entry.

cheeky: thank you my island of calm in the ocean of chaos.

signed,
fractured soul

the late phoenix said...

still mellow after listening to the new NIN album :)

GranTurismo Driver said...

Nice post, great blog, following :)

Good Luck :)

the late phoenix said...

gran: thank you

Juliette said...

Sister sledging it.

Very good.

I like the way it peters off....

the late phoenix said...

juli: ha! i'm singing it right now...